Struggling to Start Your Personal Statement? (Here's how to in 20 seconds)

Struggling to Start Your Personal Statement? (Here's how to in 20 seconds)

Doctor Shaene

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If you're struggling to start your personal statement, here's some advice.
These are the 2 sentences I used to start my personal statement that got me into Cambridge
In sentence 1, I set the scene about the subject and showed my motivation.
In sentence 2, I set the scene about myself.
I used both sentences to get across my motivation for the subject and my suitability for it.
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@abigailtrejo7255
@abigailtrejo7255 - 22.12.2023 04:42

Brilliant !

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@khushiirastogi
@khushiirastogi - 12.11.2023 15:23

hey thanks a lot of this video , its quite helpful but what if I don't have any work experience or volunteering related to my field?

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@h4gamers134
@h4gamers134 - 02.09.2023 22:57

i was about to start mine with ever since i was a child
The way you started made me feel guilty😂

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@stardreamix786
@stardreamix786 - 02.09.2023 14:24

Thank you very very much!

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@dancingnachos3634
@dancingnachos3634 - 13.02.2023 14:56

He is the guy the example every parent gives while torturing their kids😅 just kidding. Great work

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@manz007
@manz007 - 31.01.2023 13:36

Kya hal hen bhai

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@Krisharma_0306
@Krisharma_0306 - 11.01.2023 20:35

VERY HELPFUL VIDEO!!! Thanks a lot :)

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@leeHilary-fs7dd
@leeHilary-fs7dd - 08.01.2023 20:09

great

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@ayahere5105
@ayahere5105 - 31.12.2022 00:01

very helpful and clear thank you very much

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@JimingotnoJAMS
@JimingotnoJAMS - 21.10.2022 09:23

I want to study accounting and finance but didn't had this sub in my A'levels how should I write it?

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@angiesplash20
@angiesplash20 - 20.09.2022 19:40

currently watching and writing my personal statement. Helpful infomations

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@dreamers...1705
@dreamers...1705 - 19.09.2022 16:55

Will you check my personal statement..i have written it for a program??how I send u

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@1981Anood
@1981Anood - 15.09.2022 17:12

Thank you. You need to articulate more clearly and slow the speed of talk.

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@bulinda767
@bulinda767 - 15.09.2022 12:29

How can I contact you through the social media.?

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@Astrology-qk2eo
@Astrology-qk2eo - 28.08.2022 11:35

Hi can I have your email address. Need to chat.

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@martas3144
@martas3144 - 07.08.2022 23:06

Introduction
1 motivation
2 engagement

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@hopkinsjr436
@hopkinsjr436 - 17.07.2022 12:06

Kose madaret

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@bvincesf
@bvincesf - 08.06.2022 09:36

wonderful structure. no soul. robotic and antiseptic.

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@vidyarthtiwari1367
@vidyarthtiwari1367 - 26.04.2022 15:47

I've been writing my ps now and ur videos are a blessing in disguise

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@yasiiic7890
@yasiiic7890 - 04.03.2022 17:09

Greatttt

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@devyanwar7465
@devyanwar7465 - 01.03.2022 18:13

You have incredible content! It inspire me and if I successfully getting LoA, it is because of you. I will work hard for it and I will tell you once I did it 💪💪

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@nawalbabar4492
@nawalbabar4492 - 08.02.2022 18:32

Can you please review my personal statement?

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@gordonbrown1773
@gordonbrown1773 - 06.02.2022 00:29

I have submitted my personal statement, and I just watched this video and realised I did this lol.

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@JB-tj7er
@JB-tj7er - 30.01.2022 01:26

What if I have no experience?😂

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@liveloveleh
@liveloveleh - 18.01.2022 14:13

how do i write one personal statement for two courses if I chose two different courses in my application? I chose business administration as my first priority and I chose global studies as my second priority.

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@bridgetugochi7094
@bridgetugochi7094 - 12.12.2021 17:04

Just Incase the school didn't state the number of words for personal statement ,what should then be the word limit?

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@TheIpswichResilienceCenter
@TheIpswichResilienceCenter - 10.12.2021 10:17

I need some help with my personal statement, help somebody anybody or just a body lol.seriously help please

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@AbosedeTowoju
@AbosedeTowoju - 24.10.2021 12:32

Waoh!!! Waoh!!! Writing a personal statement for Human Resources Management and this guidelines really are helpful. Thank you ❤️

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@performslive
@performslive - 17.10.2021 17:14

Great tips but I think this approach is a little reductive. The statements you highlight do indeed show motivation and engagement, but additionally relay emotional intelligence, empathy and get-go to do something original. If you're going to be accepting students for medicine, you want them to talk about more than just what they themselves get out of it. You want them to show that they are interested in other people - what they want to contribute - and the statements you highlight show this very ably.

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@user-lb6nh7or4r
@user-lb6nh7or4r - 03.10.2021 16:53

I was thinking that my personal statement is great since I watched this video; now my personal statement looks like trash

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@m.adhiyaksaaryawisesa2491
@m.adhiyaksaaryawisesa2491 - 08.09.2021 16:10

nice kitchen

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@meda04
@meda04 - 12.07.2021 00:14

I’m so scared because I didn’t have much work experience except online because of covid :/

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@LilKenuthia
@LilKenuthia - 09.07.2021 17:12

im 14 and i have to write a personal statement for a school for some reason
i literally have no idea where to start
i dont know how much to include

the instructions they gave me are so vague

can anyone help???

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@bagelho1e205
@bagelho1e205 - 14.04.2021 10:59

Does this apply to masters applications as well?

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@edwardperez7124
@edwardperez7124 - 24.03.2021 01:42

Is it cool if I use the joke about starting with “ever since I’ve been a child”

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@falconetichd4652
@falconetichd4652 - 23.03.2021 11:09

Do you have tips for what to change for a secondary boarding school application personal statement?

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@-jaan6943
@-jaan6943 - 31.01.2021 20:40

I am using tips from your videos for my personal statement, even tho im year 11 going to sixth form, it still helps.

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@theprofessor103
@theprofessor103 - 19.01.2021 12:35

For applicants in 2022, we do not have the abundance and variety of work experiences that previous medical students may have possessed. Virtual work experiences, online courses are at least what we have, so how do we incorporate it in a way that still gives the message that we have learnt something valuable from it (like a real experience)?

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@olusolaogunrinde3235
@olusolaogunrinde3235 - 13.01.2021 05:45

I am presently drafting my personal statement for a postgraduate degree course, very helpful information throughout!!!
Thank you very much.

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@sandraachaia9585
@sandraachaia9585 - 02.01.2021 19:38

Hi bro, this is Sandra from Egypt. I am writing my personal statement to apply for masters program in economic development in the UK. Would really appreciate it if you could read my personal statement. Let me know if I can send it to you.
Cheers

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@muhammadabdullah7556
@muhammadabdullah7556 - 18.12.2020 16:34

Can I use acronyms or abbreviations in my personal statement?

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@Miquelalalaa
@Miquelalalaa - 15.12.2020 02:55

Fuck I said “as a child”

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@cloudythinker8794
@cloudythinker8794 - 27.10.2020 22:52

Can u do a sop for mba students or marketing based courses

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@millygibson9950
@millygibson9950 - 01.10.2020 01:36

Hi, great video thank you. Do you have any tips for including a bit about the gap year (what i plan to do as its only just started lol) :)

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