Morty's screenplay criticism | Rick and Morty | Adult Swim

U like that haaa??You want me to cut to 3 weeks earlier when u were alive??🤨

This guy has to be a novice writer; nobody else is that insecure. Also, that wasn't even criticism, Morty was just giving his opinion. You're getting on the poor kid's ass for have a preference in how he likes his stories, as if your script is so revolutionary that it actually transcends the concept of personal taste. That crap is acceptable from kids because they're kids, they're just figuring things out. You're an adult. People are allowed to have their likes and dislikes and if you don't understand that by now than you never have and never will belong in the creative industry.

Corn of action and Dead Corn. So Corny.

I share something personal with you, and you take a giant shit on it

This scene made me laugh so fucking hard

Ending scene should've said, popped corn instead of dead corn

“Take that thing down!” Isn’t meant to be a stand out funny line but I can’t help but laugh at the quick delivery 😂

Twilight saga in a nutshell

Now I want a Moopsy and a Mr. Frundles! So cute.

I SO wish they had George Lucas reading the tale. Sounds exactly like the script for Attack of the Clones

I actually like the story! Reminded me of a Michael Bay movie!

Wow.
This guy is an idiot.

Just realized the "spoken like a person with repressed rage" line is just like the "spoken like someone with needs" line from the screenplay. 😂

I love how Rick is the mannered one here

The only bad part is his voice, the way he reads and that's about it

The fact he put 0 effort into it soundin epic . Just 😅reads it like a robot which just adds to the sting of how bad it is 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

This is my favorite scene in all of Rick and Morty. To me it shows how in writing constructive criticisms are generally received as trolling. This is huge problem on the internets.

As a writer myself, this feels akward but so funny lmao

Wow morty you just purge lol

lmao this still cracks me up

One of the best moments in the whole series.

Would’ve been funny if a mob came in to kill the guy disappointed he’s already dead

Doesn't Rick and Morty literally start the same way as this script, with a bomb going off? Were the writers actually poking fun at themselves?

Who else wouldn't believe the guy in the lighthouse is actually friendly? Lmao
I thought he'd try to kill them at any chance

What I don’t understand is how I’m pretty sure I’ve seen all the Rick and Morty episodes and if this is from seven years ago how in the heck have I not seen this

Had they known this scenario was gonna go south, it wouldve saved em a lot of time just to kill that guy

I’ve been in writing classes. It’s tough when someone brings in something that’s unsalvageably bad. Nobody wants to be the one to tell someone that their thing is hacky and riddled with cliches. Morty did the best he could, offering what was basically a mild note on structure. I kind of want to hear what he would have said next lol

The writer told morty to be Honest And yet he's the one being pity🫤

Rick bangs planets, kills anyone that gets in his way, completely abandon other realities without a thought or care, play Saw with people over a slight but this is where his line is. “Woah! We’re guests here” 😂 wtf

when you tell someone is wrong on twitter

young people today probably miss a lot of the show's subtle aspects. how many people noticed the line "Spoken like someone with needs" mirrors what Rick said earlier, "Spoken like a person with repressed rage"?

the writers of Rick & Morty are literally calling themselves poor script writers.

“Did you want me to weep with joy?! It’s terrible!”

RWBY writers in a nutshell

He deserved to have his neck snapped. Fuck him

*Fade in*
(Exterior, Unnamed City, Day)
The hussle and bussle is a symphony of progress. We pan past windows, each of which contain a different story, to find Jasey Lakums, 28, hot but doesn't know it.
Jasey stops when her high heel gets caught in the grating of a sewer. Suddenly, a man steps into frame and points a gun at her. This is not her day.
*Fade to black*
Title: 3 Weeks Earlier
...
Blaine: "Maybe I don't need a new friend"
Jasey: "Maybe you're the only friend I need"
Blaine: "Need? or want?"
Jasey: "I've never been much for wanting"
Blaine: "Spoken like someone with needs"
Jasey reaches out and touches his face, it's clear he needs what she wants. She's a woman, he's a man. The city burns in the background as he takes her in his arms.
*Fade out*
Title: The End?

This scene of morty listening to the guys tale weirdly enough motivates me to be a better writer

You **** deserved it

I used to feel bad for Jerry about how his family treats him but then I realized he usually just proves their points.