How to STRUCTURE your C1 ADVANCED (CAE) ESSAY! - C1 Advanced (CAE) Essay Writing

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I really don't think the amount of rhetorical questions in the introduction. It's too informal, and makes it seen more like an article.

Nice video!! You were born in order to teach us!

That's the most helpful video for sure

Really good..... Jusy could you be a bit more mellow as your content is very good. Thank you.

Needs a tranquilliser. Too hysterical!

I have the exam tomorrow, thank you for these videos❤️‍🔥

This was really clear, my adhd brain is like !!!!!yes!!!!!!

I've been told that we should omit using rhetorical questions in our academic writings, what do you think about it?

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beutifull

You are the best

Thank you kindly Toby , your explanation in this video will certainly be of use for my upcoming exam

great video, super easy to understand. I love your mood! but most importanly, you don´t add any irrelevant information.

You do a 10/10 work for our own benefit and for free.

THANK YOU SO MUCH TOBY!! 😍

Why does your helpfulness need to be so aggressive?

Dope video

So rhetorical questions can be used in these essays? I thought C1 essays need to be formal and that rhetorical questions can't be used in formal writing.

Hi Toby! Thank you! Great vid!

Hope you can answer some questions though.

Do the prompts need to be similar in nature? What I mean if the first prompt was negative, should be second be as well? Vice versa, when it's positive.

For example,
Prompt 1 idea: Work is exhausting it drains the existence of oneself.
Prmopt 2: Culture denies individual identity. It tends to create a monolith approach.

I understand it's compare and contrast but I'm having a time comprehending the essence of the essay.
Would it be fine for the first prompt to be overwhelming whereas the second to be underwhelming?
I find it easier to do it this way.

I have recently learnt to use the PEEL approach towards my essays but I am concerned about the details. They're not a hundred percrent factual but there's a little truth in them. I mean it's not fact checking right, but is that advisable? Fabrication of researches and articles in the prompts.

In addition, what level of being specific should I do in each example I give to the prompt? I'm now knowledgeable that experiences don't count.

Also, I'm confused where to apply the compare and contrast part? Should I take it holistically? Or do I contrast prompt 1 and 2? And compare them in the conclusion with my insight?
Is this a fine approach?

Thanks!

Very helpfull! Thank you!

Can I kind of merge the fourth pragraph and the conclusion into one?

Thank you for your video. I love your clear words!

Is it ok if we do it without the forth paragraph(just intro, 2 body paragraphs and conclusion)or is it necessary?

Extremely good👍

how many complex grammar structures are required?

Thank you Toby!

Great video! So, Toby, do you think it's okay for me to write my essay in cursive?

💞💓💗💖 Thank you!!!

This video was extremely useful for me because when i write an essay i usually have problems with the structure. Thank u so much

Hi Tobby!! Yesterday I received the qualifications of the B2 exman and I was really surprised when I realized I got 185 points over 190 in speaking. Incredible! Now I'm into the C1 advanced level and I'm trying so hard not to give it up. Seriously, you're helping me a lot and I couldn't be more grateful of your work. I don't even know if you're gonna respond to my message but I guess yes.

THANK YOU SO MUCH TOBY!! Today I got my results for the B2 exam and I got a VERY high score!! I was close to C1!! You helped me A LOT during the preparation of my exam and I couldn't be more grateful😍😍. Next step, C1 !

please don't stop posting videos, you are so good... ;-;

I'm taking the B2 in less than a month and I am very scared😬

When I watched one of your videos for the first time you had only 900 followers... and now... almost 12.000... Congratulations! You're great!

You're great !!!

Thank you so much Toby!! Would you mind giving us some more common topics for an essay please? I didn't practice any writing for my B2 but I would like to be more prepared for C1 😂

I will be eternally grateful, your videos are great and very educational. You have saved my day. I would like to know a C1 structure for formal and informal letters. You are a start.

Please start a podcast