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Bramblekit watched as Swiftpaw's tail lifetd into the air, teasing the kits. Tawnykit leapt onto the tom's tail and began squealing happily as she was swung around. Bramblekit could feel Goldenflower's hard gaze on his neck, burning like a flame. He shook it off and hopped onto Swiftpaw's back. He admired his brother so much, he knew Swiftpaw would make a good warrior. He hoped when he became an pprentice, Swiftpaw could be his mentor. "Swiftpaw! It's time to hunt!" Called Longtail, the tom was swishing his elegant tail back and fourth impatiently. "Coming!" Called Swiftpaw as he dropped the kits off. Then he continued, "I'll play with you're later. I'm going hunting with Thornpaw!" And, with that, he bounded towards Longtail, who was with Thornpaw. The three cats exited through the entrance tunnel. "Tawnykit, Bramblekit, nap time." Came Goldenflower's voice as she scooped her kits up by her taol. She carried them into the nursery and set them down. Bramblekit glanced around. Willowpelt was snoring with Sorrelkit, Sootkit and Rainkit while Speckletail napped with Snowkit. Bramblekit promised he would be the best warrior ever! Better than Swiftpaw!
Bramblekit felt a paw kick him as he awoke, what was going on? A buzzing filled his ears and he wondered if a bee hive had moved in. He forced his paws to carry him out of the nursery. He gasped. Swiftpaw was lying in a heap in the middle of camp. Wounds covered him from ear to paw, his mouth wide open as if he was about to shriek. Blood was pouring out, beside him, Brightpaw was lying in a heap as well, yet breathing. Bramblekit ran up to Swiftpaw before any cat could stop him. Swiftpaw needed him. Bramblekit needed Swiftpaw! He looked at the apprentices eyes, they werd stretched wide in horror and glazed. "No...Don't go...I know your just playing dead...Your promised to show me some battle moves! You promised!" He whispered into his cold fur, blood filled his mouth as he gazed at the black-and-white fur. "Shhh...He's gone Bramblekit." Murmured Goldenflower as she rubbed herself against her son, trying to pull him away. "No!" Protested Bramblekit, he forced himself under Swiftpaw. He would protect him.
For those of you who don't know, SwiftPaw and BrambleKit are half brothers.
ОтветитьI JUST FINISHED READING THIS OART OF THE BOOOOKJNAIWIAPAPljwq
ОтветитьAw poor Swiftpaw and bramblekit
ОтветитьJust wanna say, SwiftPaw has a lot of half-siblings,
He has: LongTail, FrostFur, SpeckleTail (wait a minute isn’t that GoldenFlowers mom 💀?), RavenPaw, DustPelt, LynxKit, BrambleStar, and TawnyPelt
How:
RobinWing had: SpeckleTail, FrostFur, LongTail, RavenPaw, and DustPelt
PatchPelt is the father: LongTail, SwiftPaw, & LynxKit.
HOLY SHART THIS IS BEAUTIFUL! U MUST JOIN MY WARRIOR DOGS MAP :0
ОтветитьI always forget that Swiftpaw was older than Bramblestar
Ответитьtvå år..
ОтветитьOh my gosh this was so cute, and I love your art style!
ОтветитьI wish that bramble had some interactions with swift, maybe if bramble dies before the series ends we can see them reunite
ОтветитьI wish that siblings were addressed more in warrior cats-
And family as a whole tbh-
Like Snow'Kit is Lion'Heart and Golden'Flower's baby brother-
You'd think they'd be more upset about his death-
Ok now this is just sad
ОтветитьAmazing. Sad, but amazing.
ОтветитьYou actually made SwiftPaw’s death sad.
ОтветитьBramblekit: "i'm gonna be just like you Swiftpaw" Swiftpaw: dies Bramblekit: "wait does that mean i die too?"
ОтветитьSLAY
ОтветитьHello bramblekit aka bramble star
ОтветитьOk, #1 YOUR ART IS AMAZING #2 brings back memories of the couple first books #3 I LOVE YOUR STYLE OF ART!❤
ОтветитьThat’s a subscription from me! Swiftpaw was one of my favorite cats and you did this so beautifully, I can’t wait to see future art from you
Ответитьballed my eyes out when Swiftpaw died. people can see him as an annoying apprentice, but to me he just wanted to be as good as everyone else which lead him down the wrong path to prove it. i hope that in the books when Bramblestar was being a jerk, Swiftpaw watched and wished to his brother to change his ways. it would be real sweet though if Swiftpaw gave Bramblestar a life, or vowed to wait for him til it was his time to join star clan<33
Ответитьwhy 😢 what has to be killing fighter you're so sad not good not good but I kind of little like it but the blood is really freaking me out but good job I'll give you a 65 and a half good job you're with you hahaha😅
ОтветитьMe and my sis use worryore cats for are role-playing and btrix dies poor ash he is left alone
ОтветитьThis reminds everyone that SwiftPaw wasn’t a little apprentice, and how much he meant to everyone, not just his mentor.
ОтветитьIt's so cute 🥺 It melt my ♥️ ...
ОтветитьWow I love your art style it’s so pretty!
ОтветитьThis made me cry nine times in a row bc I re watched it nine times in a row
ОтветитьI know I'm late but I don't cry at these but.... this one almost made me cry
ОтветитьI thought this was going to be cute until the end…
Ответитьidc how cute this is i still think ashfur shoulda been with squirrelflight
ОтветитьIf Swiftpaw would’ve lived, I guess they would be gay :).
ОтветитьThat is so heartbreaking but so cute! I always forget of how they are siblings, but that is just so cute!
Ответитьsobbing, It’s so sad yet so good!! I love it and still crying
ОтветитьThis 8s so sad I remember this part in the book exactly as it is.... 😢 😔
ОтветитьI dont see the connection . where they like half brothers or somthin?
ОтветитьI rlly hope bramble still remembers swift cause aaaahavsv
ОтветитьSwiftpaw's age was like warior's when he died😭😭😭
Ответить:c
ОтветитьWhy swiftpaw have to die!!!!
ОтветитьThis is honestly beautiful I love the storytelling and SwiftPaw is my favorite character thank you thank you so much for doing this is really heartwarming to think that brambleKit could still possibly remember swiftPaw…
ОтветитьIt hurts me to believe that sometimes you never age in starclan, so Swiftpaw may stay an apprentice forever. He might never receive the warrior name he wanted.
Ответитьhow you gonna make this and not put the used song 💀
ОтветитьSad 😢
ОтветитьOh my god I didn't even realize they were brothers- This makes Swiftpaw's death so much worse :(
Ответитьhiii dew its me pankie :]
ОтветитьI forgot they were brother.
Now i'm sad.
See, this is why we need Swiftpaw's novella, to get moments like this! If we could get a Super Edition that showed events of the first arc from Leopardstar's view (which I don't mind, really fun read), then surely we could get events from Swiftpaw's view, show how he felt being unfairly stuck as an apprentice, and have him interact with his half-siblings (as first arc is from Firestar's POV, it's believable that he didn't see EVERYTHING, so it's no surprise there could be some stuff happening in ThunderClan that wasn't brought up in the first arc)
ОтветитьI keep forgetting that TawnyPelt, BrambleStar, and SwiftPaw were all siblings. This animation is super cute and the art style is awesome!
ОтветитьIt’s better than the Raven’Paw-Tiger’Claw one… that one just- 😫
ОтветитьThis is so sad and this is what you call content
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