5 MOST COMMON C1 Advanced (CAE) Essay MISTAKES! - C1 Advanced (CAE) Essay Writing

Great video! Thanks Toby🎉🎉🎉

One thing bothers me. I've been doing mock essays which are classified and examined by teachers according to the official Cambridge Rules yet they never mentioned that I should specify which points I chose in the introduction. The introduction is supposedly (according to them) an introduction to the general topic, then in the first and second paragraphs we discuss the points, in the third we identify our "favourite" and then we conclude. How come? In my opinion, in an actual essay, no matter if Cambridge or not, there should be no need to specify the topics discussed in the introduction, it's redundant.

Hi Toby!! I'm preparing for the CAE exam and your channel is just what I was looking for. Keep doing this amazing channel of yours and thank you very much for all the advices, I will buy you as many beers as I can haha!

Thanks, Toby.
I may try passing the C1, but firstly I'd like to get the B2 certificate. In Ukraine all Cambridge certificate centres are currently closed, due to war. Furthermore, I can't go abroad because I'm 26 years old man. By the law all men should stay in Ukraine just in case we are needed for war. So I have no Idea when exactly I could be able to use your great advice for getting B2 First 🥲

Dear Toby,
you are great teacher.
Pls write instructions to CPE Essay writing.
Thanking in advance
Tamara

Hello Toby, i accidentally put wrong number which was directed to review while i chose the letter. Are they still going to mark it?

GREAT.SMASH ENGLISH.
Thanks yuo so much for yuor advice!!⚡!

Thank you for your advice on the B2 I pass it very easily

Yup did these mistakes while writing an Essay and passed the b2 certificate instead of c1 I missed 8points 😀😀

Keep going 🙌