12 Ways to Write Better Sentences for Creative Writers

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So helpful!!

Thank you so much for sharing. So glad I found your channel!

Thank you for the video. It has helpful tips, but starts off with some of the... best known? examples. I came close to signing out, but clicked through the chapters, instead. Glad I did, but thought that feedback might be helpful to you in the event your other viewers, drop-by-'ers, etc., might feel the same way. Wanna make sure you're getting the results for all your great hardworking.

Not from the English speaking world. But the tips hold true for all the printed words.Brevity is the soul of any communication.

"This doesn't add any meaningful information because we all know what it sounds like and looks like to stomp snow from our shoes . . ."

Me: * Sweats in having-never-left-Florida writer *

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This is invaluable. Thank you.

Something isn't clear to me, 'avoid using was -ing structure. You don't give an example of simultaneous actions, where one action occurs as another is occurring. I'm not sure if you are saying to avoid this, or just 'was -ing,' structure by itself. I love your videos, btw.

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Thanks Ellen

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You just wrecked my novel. Thank you! 😀

I do not wish to write sentences for creative writers. They can write their own.

How do I set word choices for a surreal dream like effect? Can I get some more pointers there?

I came here for writing advice and left with that and a crush. Thank you for the lessons!

Outstanding. Many thanks.

This is genuinely the best video I’ve seen. I love the proper examples on screen!

He laid across the bed, his body limp, like a wet bar rag.

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This was so helpful! I'll definitely be coming back to this video.

Read E.E. Cummins.

Great summary. One tip I suggest is: Read out aloud what you have written at least 24 hours or longer after you have written it. This helps you to understand the effective meaning of your words and whether they flow.

i love how you provide examples with each tip

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Awesome. Very helpful.

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In talking about complex sentences. You said shared bedroom instead of shared bathroom. You probably should edit that.

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This was incredibly helpful and well delivered. Thank you.

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This is, without a doubt, the best writing tips video I've seen so far. I've seen dozens, perhaps hundreds at this point. And yet, this has proposed a set of simple, common, and fatal issues and mistakes, then presented a coherent explanation and provided fluid examples. Thank you very much!

what to do is.good.

Step one: punctuation.

really good video!

Great review. Glad I found your channel.

I am not a native English speaker, but I frequently read English novels.

So many of the things you describe here are all over those books!

I was always thinking, well, isn't this bad style?

Funnily enough, it seems to be - it just somehow ends up in those books anyway.

What I personally despise: When conjunctions and similar words are used randomly just for mixing things up while not caring about the actual meaning of the world.

"He got out of bed before going to the toilet."

Uuuuuuuugh ...

Come on, dude, is there any way to do it the other way round?!

(Might come in handy at times.)

Why did the writer become a gardener?

Because they wanted to "plot" new stories and watch their ideas "blossom"!

This is very helpful, thank you